Interesting Venus

May 15, 2015 22:33
Today, I'd like to write about Venus.

Venus is the most brightest planet in the planets of the solar system, and we can see it from the earth well.

Also, Venus rotates clockwise, while all the other planets rotate counterclockwise.

The period of rotation is 243 days, and the period of revolution is 224 days.

This numbers mean one day is longer than one year in Venus.

There are many other interesting features about Venus, for example, it have the highest temperature in the planets of the solar system.
今日は、金星について書きます。

金星は、太陽系の惑星の中で最も明るい星で、地球からもよく見えます。

また、金星は太陽系の惑星で唯一自転方向が逆(時計回り)で、その自転周期は惑星の中で最も長い243日です。

金星の公転周期は224日なので、金星の一日は一年よりも長いことになります。

その他にも、惑星の中で最も温度が高いなど、金星は多くの面白い性質を持っています。
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  • Today, I'd like to write about Venus.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Venus is the most brightest planet in the planets of the solar system, and we can see it from the earth well.
  • Venus is the most brightest planet in the planets of the solar system, and we can easily see it from the Earth well.
  • Also, Venus rotates clockwise, while all the other planets rotate counterclockwise.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • The period of rotation is 243 days, and the period of revolution is 224 days.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • This numbers mean one day is longer than one year in Venus.
  • This These numbers mean one day is longer than one year in on Venus.
  • There are many other interesting features about Venus, for example, it have the highest temperature in the planets of the solar system.
  • There are many other interesting features about Venus, for example, it have has the highest temperature in of the planets of in the solar system.
Great entry! I didn't know these facts about Venus. Thanks! :)
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
I'm happy about your words. :D
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